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April 9, 2011
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=Self-Epidemic Apr 19, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
Its nice, but I would suggest working on your composition, light, and why are you doing that? Whats the point, message, mood? At the moment, it just looks like a pre-shot, you know, before you do the photoshoot. To see which lens to use.
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:iconfreakylaurent:
~FreakyLaurent Apr 20, 2012  Professional Photographer
Now that's rather an interesting critic right there !

This happen to be taken outside as I was about to come inside from a sunny day.

Then again, Minimal photoshop to bring this into so called result.

This was taken w/ a Canon G-12 at close up !

Thanks
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:iconself-epidemic:
=Self-Epidemic Apr 20, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
well I would say, line up the water straight with the image, compositionally that would strengthen the piece here is a quick play in photoshop:
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I straightened the image, and gave it a quick mood by altering the colour, you could do that all manually with your camera, next time you take a photograph, try to remember your composition, what are your eyes looking at? then find a way to frame it, create a pattern or use rule of thirds.
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:iconfreakylaurent:
~FreakyLaurent Apr 20, 2012  Professional Photographer
Just a mere tilt
Never thought of that
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:iconself-epidemic:
=Self-Epidemic Apr 20, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
composition can enhance a picture tenfold, granted if I had took it I wuld of had the entire flower in frame and moved it to the right slightly. here are a few rules of composition to get you started:
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:iconsepp93:
*amazing work* ~ :heart:
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~DrakkarVance Apr 10, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is very pretty, I like it c:
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